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WIP 3 by =Dub-T:iconDub-T:

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Background for a commission piece.

Rainy cityscape for :iconfrostyxx:'s oc.

As always, comments and critiques are welcome and requested.

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~ladyjazzkiller Jun 11, 2009, 3:18:58 PM
It's looking beautimous myfriend!! You should put Goliath on the corner of that building there. :paranoid:

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=Dub-T Jun 11, 2009, 4:47:47 PM
I'm sure you meant to say Bat-Man

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~ladyjazzkiller Jun 11, 2009, 7:08:31 PM
Pretty sure I meant to say Goliath. :|

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=Dub-T Jun 11, 2009, 7:25:25 PM
How about Bat-Man and Goliath high-fiving each other?

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*Chadfuller Jun 11, 2009, 7:39:09 PM
looks great to me!
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~ladyjazzkiller Jun 11, 2009, 8:10:39 PM
That is full of win.

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~frostbain Jun 11, 2009, 8:14:32 PM
Looks good overall. Only thing I would say is get some sort of layering effect going on with the rain - it looks like it's all falling a few feet away from the camera; as opposed to on the whole city.
Easiest way to do it would probably be to make a few variations of the layer; scale them down the "further" back they get; and erase anything that would be behind a building.

If you have a 3d modelling program; you could also do a PNG with transparency of a particle effect to simulate rain - that worked out pretty well the last time I did it. Just set it up as a very long strip of the particle-rain (particle + motion blur + 50% transparent gray material) with the camera looking down the length of it. Render with transparency, and bring into your image.

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=Dub-T Jun 11, 2009, 9:32:46 PM
That's what I'm having the hardest time with. The damn rain. It's actually three separate layers.

I'm going to try a few other things. I appreciate any suggestions and help you can offer.

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=Dub-T Jun 11, 2009, 9:44:26 PM
We are geniuses!

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